I'm not much of a help for advanced critique as I've never had any experience with 3D renders; however, I'll try

First, I have to say that this is amazing Especially the details on the furry blanket and the chairs and like everything else

Anyway, my only critiques are:
1. The windows seem too blue, in my opinion. Maybe a lighter, less saturated (more grey-blue) would look a little better.
2. The border kind of takes away from the rest of it. Maybe make it smaller or get rid of it altogether?

Looking forward to the finished version I'll check back for it, it may go into my favorites.

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That's really cool! I have to agree about the border though. I love how bright everything seems. Great job!

The window has this problem..

And the door has a problem with the lights.

Tanks for the coments
And i will try to fix this problem in the next version..

Tanks

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Ty

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3D max.. baixei mas nun sei mexer nem salvar em Jpeg ^^

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Voce pode fazer tudo o que quizer desde que vc acredite em vc mesmo!!!

and.... you can get everything you want...

hahaha...
num é dificil de mexer...
na verdade, entre todos os softwares 3d que eu conheço, esse é o mais fácil...

eu tenho alguns tutos escritos nesse fórum: [link] meu nick lá é dragun

e qualquer dúvida cara, pode perguntar que eu tenho o maior prazer em ajudar..

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Youre good with 3D max,. damn.

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tanks

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